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Reaching

Let me
swim into your eyes
with mirrors in mine
to show you
the darkness you see
is only a cloud
passing
through a world
as colourful as yours
©2007-2009 ~dream-head
:icondream-head:

Author's Comments

I wrote this after seeing a friend who had lost sight of her colour, and I really wanted to reach her and show her.

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:iconshadow-mantis:
A truly caring idea, did it work out?

The last line really grabs me and makes an impact.

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Just make-believe.
:iconmissleo:
As usual, your words create such vivid pictures here...It's so beautifully written, & I like the almost abstraction you've used to express yourself.
:icondream-head:
Thanks again Shadow-Mantis, I've seen my friend who is such a colourful person literally appearing in black and white, totally drained, which is hard to see, so I am glad you appreciate the last line, as it is really the heart of the poem.

--
Poetry is a phantom script telling how rainbows are made and why they go away - Carl Sandburg
:icondream-head:
Erin - Thank you for your constant encouragement :) x. I like the way you have looked into it to see and appreciate the abstract about it..

--
Poetry is a phantom script telling how rainbows are made and why they go away - Carl Sandburg

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